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The Wheels On The Blog Go Round & Round....

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Every once in awhile, in a daze where the moon is blue and my mind renders no immediate thought, a title of a post comes to mind and I have no clue of what the context may be about.  So, off the cuff and raw/uncut as I can be....this would be one of those times.

I told my sweet and even-tempered co-worker Ann Guy that I want to write about something that has never been written about on this forum.  At the same time, I wanted to make sure it fits the parameters of what Active-Rain is all about.  I can honestly say I've read thousands of blogs and will do so ongoing, but rarely does one catch my eye as being off-the-charts fantastic.

The featured posts are for the most part, very good.  The posts with a large amount of commentary & comments tend to be interesting and thought provoking.   And as the nature of the beast would have it, a lot of very good stuff gets unnoticed.  Yet, I get bored easily.  Especially if unchallenged and reading the same old crap over & over & over again.  I want something different, something unique, something special that will challenge my world and awake my thoughts.  Then, I thought about it.  It's not so much what you write (though subject matter remains key to a large extent), it is how you write it.  I'm not looking for Shakespeare or King, but I am looking for those who make their posts fun to read.

Don't get me wrong, there are an abundance of talented writers & knowledgeable professionals here.  I just want to push the envelope to some degree.  Now, that may mean writing Hard-Core Real Estate Stuff, Consumer-Oriented Material, a better way to garner attention to your writing...or maybe even trying to conquer or at least have a stranglehold on Google...

I've said it before and will say it again.  I will always look for those words, that sentence, that paragraph, that explains it all.  While I will never find it, the search is freaking on!

I love the fact that Active-Rain has reached the point where more than 50,000 people share whatever they have to contribute.  And posts & contributions, no matter how mundane, will continue to be churned out in great numbers.  It's not what you write, it's how you write.

We all have a role, in life & this forum.  While I'd love to sit and chastise those who write what I perceive as crap, is it?  The contributions are many and as long as we all share what we got, the wheels will spin and we will move forward.  Folks, to some extent, we are a team.  I may not read you, like you, know you, or have a clue that you even exist...same goes for your perception of me.  But, if you give me YOU in what your write, I don't give a flying rat's beady arse how bad your grammar or spelling may be, how misconstrued your facts might be, you gave you.  This forum is better for it.

With every post, the wheels spin.  Yet, the highway is long...we have a long drive ahead.  Keep on blogging, contributing, and whether the stuff you post has been posted or talked about before, it comes from you.  That, in my estimation, is very important.  That is what makes this different and very real.  The wheels go round and we aren't driving, but I'm very sure we can be contributing passengers along the way.

46 commentsJason Sardi, Mortgage Banker • September 26 2007 09:53PM

Comments

Hi Jason. I understand where you are coming from completely. I have to say though....I get a little tired (yawn) of hearing people talk about others people writing being crappy. I cannot stand the kind of stuff Danielle Steele writes, but theres a lot of people out there who love it and I shouldn't judge them for that. I think a lot of people write crap at first and that can help them write better so I think we all agree there is a process. :)

We all want to be inspired by words...impacted by thoughts, but theres beauty in the attempt as well. As long as its original.

Posted by Pamela Williamson Team Clayton, Missouri Real Estate (Dielmann Sotheby's International Realty) over 2 years ago

Jason, I joined AR in late May. I've read some excellent writing -- the quality of which one would expect from a national magazine. I love the craft of writing. Wordsmithing is an art, perhaps a lost one.

Of all the blogs I've read I have to vote the gentleman's (Gary?) who penned the parody of selling Crest for $35 as the most creative, well-structured. As a frustrated creative writer I liken blogging on AR to Dicken's serialization of his famous novels. At the time he was paid by the word so he stretched the stories out. That profit incentive produced Great Expectations and Oliver Twist.

Someone from this community will produce a seminal piece or an outline of a book that will be a future bestseller.  

Posted by Blogger To Be Named Later over 2 years ago
Well put Pamela, I agree completely!  I wrote a bunch of crap at first and plan on doing so again, "beauty in the attempt"....those are wise words.  The more attempts, the better off we probably are.
Posted by Jason Sardi, Mortgage Banker (FHA-VA-USDA-Conventional-Pennsylvania Loans) over 2 years ago
That was a fantastic post Andrew, one of the best!  By the way, that's a fantastically written comment, I'm subscribing to Andrew J. Lenza right about NOW!
Posted by Jason Sardi, Mortgage Banker (FHA-VA-USDA-Conventional-Pennsylvania Loans) over 2 years ago

Jason,

I'm all for pushing the envelope....sometimes a little to far for my own good. But when you put your self out there, it definitely is much more interesting than the same old boring stuff. Nicely Done!  

 

Posted by Suzanne Sands-Somerset, MA Real Estate (Century 21 Associates Realty) over 2 years ago

Everything....this is the song my son sent me from Japan in 2006. 

What you see is what you get...I get the same thing here...thank you.

Posted by Celeste "SALLY" Cheeseman HAWAII Relocations & Real Estate (Century 21 Liberty Homes) over 2 years ago
I swear my eyes will be permanently crossed from all the reading I do in search of well written posts.  AR has turned me into a blog junkie ever searching for highly crafted, thought provoking blogs.  Is there a group for fans of wordsmiths? 
Posted by Melissa Schnieders (Realty World) over 2 years ago
Well I know I am definitely not one of the better wordsmiths here, but I think I am pretty darn good at coming across as me.   Now I wish I could carry a little of that over to my "other" blog.  This is sort of an interesting post.  I have read a lot more posts than I have commented on recently, because they just didn't inspire me. Not sure what I am looking for, but I too am waiting to be inspired!
Posted by Ginger Wilcox, Marin County Realtor (Alain Pinel, Marin Real Estate) over 2 years ago

Jason,

To me, your posts are most often entirely thought provoking!  While I understand your thoughts I find it impossible to classify the entire site as "mundane".  There are just too many blogs to read, and unfortuntately many are mundane.  But there are many that are not, too....such as yours and hopefully when cleverness strikes, mine too!  :)

Posted by Sarah Eubanks ~ Preferred Oregon Loan Consultant & Notary Public (Hill Valley Financial Services) over 2 years ago
Jason -- liked the post/ I/ve been writing more about sports lately -- could you tell me more about the picture on the right in your profile? 
Posted by Aziz Abdur-Raoof,Howard Co. Real Estate Scoop (RE/MAX Rewards) over 2 years ago

I have to admit that I do believe the truth won't be found in a phrase alone, but in a book. I believe that "raw' comes from the heart and soul of a person. Anything else is just fabricated, albeit very well fabricated in the case of some of the greats. I hope to see that next big post from you Jason. I am always looking for that next opportunity to stretch myself, to see a new horizon. I hope the same for you. Until then, keep letting the words and thoughts out. It'll come together one day.

Posted by Andrew Trevino Wilkes-Barre Homes For Sale (TradeMark Realtors Group) over 2 years ago

I bet having that title bouncing around your head was driving you nuts until the concept eventually fell into place.  LOL.  I tend to look for great writing more than I look for great information.  I blog for business, sure, but it's also an outlet for me.  I've always fashioned myself an author without a topic.  Love to write, never know what to write about.  The beauty of AR is that you can pull a Seinfeld, and practically write about nothing some days.  I usually like those entries the best because they are not forced, carry no agenda ... just simply are.  I admire craft as much as content.  Take this one.  I didn't learn a damn thing, but it was a great read.  Thanks for that.

Posted by Paul Slaybaugh, Scottsdale AZ Real Estate (Realty Executives) over 2 years ago

Jason-  ummmm I can honestly say that what I write is ME.  I don't write many Posts, but when I do they all have something I want to convey, from me.......

Posted by Kathy McGraw, Riverside County CA Real Estate (CELLing Realty) over 2 years ago

NO YOU DIDN'T!!  (the wheels on the bus....)

I think we should do more video blogs, or even podcasts.  That would be interesting.  Since today seems like the prediction day, that would be my prediction for blogging.  Less text and more multi media.

What do you think Sardi, (I mean dahling)?

Posted by Tracey Thomas Calabasas, CA Real Estate (Keller Williams Realty) over 2 years ago
Jason - I love it that you are always YOU - I'm with Tracey I find myself moving on to video - which may not be a good thing because as Andrew said, and I'm beginning to believe the Art of Writing is becoming a lost art. It takes work (for me at least) to NOT create crap (LOL) - being as it's your blog I figured I'd use it at least once. Keep pushing on - I'm on the bus with you - enjoying the ride!  
Posted by Clearwater Real Estate Pinellas Florida Condos & Homes for Sale- Cyndee Haydon (Charles Rutenberg Realty) over 2 years ago
Jason - Even the Bible tells us, "there is nothing new under the sun".  You're so right Jason, it may not be new stuff, but the way we communicate it can be very different.  Not all writers will appeal to all readers...and the wheels on the blog go round...
Posted by Laguna Homes|Laguna Condos| Laguna Real Estate|Marlene Bridges (Sherman Smith & Associates) over 2 years ago
Sardi - I liked this post, and I agreed with your premise here.  I am always on the lookout for great writing, both here and elsewhere.  Thanks for provoking some thought!
Posted by Jason Crouch, Broker - Austin Texas Real Estate (512-796-7653) (Austin Texas Homes, LLC) over 2 years ago
Geez, quit looking for something that explains it ALL.  Look for the stuff that explains one thing so well that you're blown away.  If the whole world could be explained simply it wouldn't be any fun, would it?  
Posted by Sarah Cooper (Real Estate Shows) over 2 years ago
I'm just tired of 'splaining myself.  I'm in a localism groove.  I have been too busy to write anything that would interest anyone recreationally.  
Posted by Chris Elizabeth Griffith ~ Bonita Springs Fl Real Estate (Downing-Frye Realty, Bonita Springs, FL) over 2 years ago

Suzanne - I agree my dear, and I think it is fun!

Sis - I'll check out the song.  I am familiar with Lifehouse:-)

Melissa - Ohhhh, maybe you should create one.  I like the concept!

Ginger - Give me time gal, I'll work up something to inspire you.  Welcome back.

Sarah - Oh, you are clever alright.  I first noticed that at the Carnival of Content for Mortgage Folks.  And I don't know why I haven't before, but I'm subscribing to your blog.  I'm deeply afraid I'm missing some very good stuff.

Aziz - Lol.  Which one?  There is the one where I'm dressed in a Barney-esque looking purple shirt and tie with a manufactored smile or there is the MEEZ below it where I'm sitting at a desk conjuring up a way to Rule The World:-)

Andrew - I love the big posts, I love the small posts...as long as their real.  In my mind the worst stuff I've written was forced and/or manufactored.  The best was from the soul. YOU are becoming one of my favorite writers here by the way.

Paul - LMAO!  Now that is a comment that made me laugh.  Very true and I didn't learn a damn thing from writing it.  Oh, you just gave me an idea....

Kathy - That's just one of the reasons why you are very special my dear.  I like the way you write.

Dahling - Yes I did:-)  I would love to do video blogs and/or podcasts more often, I just need the proper equipment.  I think that is a splendid idea.

Cyndee- Crap and My Blog go hand in hand, like peas and carrots.  Eat your veggies and read my blog:-)

Marlene - I hate the bus but as long as I'm on it, it would be a nice ride being able to actually talk to you.  You are very inspirational you know!

Crouch - This weekend I may go on a Newbie search....just to see.

Cooper - I respectfully disagree, I believe it can be done.  I may be wrong, but I'll die trying & searching.

Chris - You are becoming the Localism Queen.  Even though I'm directionless, if I keep reading you I may be able to find myself knowing my way around Bonita Springs!

 

Posted by Jason Sardi, Mortgage Banker (FHA-VA-USDA-Conventional-Pennsylvania Loans) over 2 years ago

Jason,

Who is to say what is good content and what isn't. Well I guess it is the moderator who chooses you or not or the rating you get:)...but that does not necessarily mean your stuff stinks or is very good. It is all about what the percentage of readers think ...unless we are being judged by some professor who is an expert I'm not sure how critical it is to be judged.

Posted by Neal Bloom-Realtor ® Assoc.-CRS-Weston FL (Keller Williams Properties) over 2 years ago

Jason, I kept having that song go through my head when I read this, " The wheels on the bus go round and round, round and round, round and round. The wheels on the bus go round and round all through the town. The people on the bus go up and down, up and down, up and down. The people on the bus go up and down all through the town.

" The wheels on the bus go round and round, round and round, round and round. The wheels on the bus go round and round all through the town. The people on the bus go up and down, up and down, up and down. The people on the bus go up and down all through the town.

" The wheels on the bus go round and round, round and round, round and round. The wheels on the bus go round and round all through the town. The people on the bus go up and down, up and down, up and down. The people on the bus go up and down all through the town.

 Ok, you get it.

Posted by Missy Caulk-Ann Arbor- Realtor(R)- Ann Arbor Real Estate (Keller Williams-Ann Arbor) over 2 years ago

I don't give a flying rat's beady arse how bad your grammar or spelling may be, how misconstrued your facts might be   <------you may not, but others will, as they should.  While it is altogether vital that we put "us" in what we write, it is just as important that our grammar and spelling be competent, even if not flawless.  Grammar's harder, but c'mon, how difficult is it to run spellcheck on your post?  As passionate as I am about that, it pales in comparison to my quest for truth.  Misconstrued facts?  We're in a business that relies heavily on facts.  We can't suffer misconstruing them!  Our consumer is counting on us to bring them accurate information.  Facts, misconstrued, are in essence, lies.

Love the rest of the post Sardi, but I'm raking you over the coals for that one.  (done with love of course)

Posted by Palmetto Bay | Redland Real Estate | Maggie Dokic (Prudential Florida Realty) over 2 years ago
Interesting post, Jason.  I know my posts are not anywhere on a par with most of the other Activerainers (who should be writing as a profession if you ask me) but they are MINE.  My words and my thoughts, as jumbled as they may get at times.   And I keep on trying....
Posted by Carole Provenzale Owner, Feng Shui Long Island & New York (Feng Shui Long Island & New York City) over 2 years ago
Jason:  I have to kindly disagree with those that advocate for you to do videos.  Nothing can replace the beauty of the written word nor the way you use them to let us in and feel what you are feeling.  I write from a passion within and find it terribly hard to write about something in which I have no interest.  Hopefully that is a good thing.  By the way...did you try the game?  You might find some good writers out there that the moderators missed!
Posted by Lake Norman Real Estate ~ Diane Aurit (LKN Realty, LLC) over 2 years ago

I agree wholeheartedly, Jason.....what might be 'crap' to one person, just may be exactly what the next guy needed to read at that moment. If someone writes it, they are on a path that told them to write it for some reason.....they might not even be aware of the reason, however following your heart is what matters.

I don't believe anyone should be taking some one elses words or thoughts though and misconstruing or copy and pasting them....that, to me, is not really following one's heart; moreso following one's ego.

Jo 

Posted by Jo-Anne Smith- Oakville, Burlington and Mississauga Region Real Estate, Ont (Sutton Group - Quantum Realty Inc., Brokerage) over 2 years ago

Jason - Wheels on the bus?  Let's go deeper.  How about a little Jerry? 

I think the words flow right in to what your talking about.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=S7ItqmNqtFE



Posted by Mike Mueller (Tech and Social Media Consultant) over 2 years ago
JASON:  Now I'm mad at you!  The other stuff was just a joke, but this is serious.  I mean, this is beyond what I expect, even from you.  Are you good and fired up now and ready for another battle?  Well here it comes.  You have interfered with my work and my blogging.  How am I supposed to get anything done with "The Wheels On The Bus" playing over and over and over again in my head?  How about some consideration for your fellow man?  I was working on the next great blog.  The one that was going to be the blog to end all blogs.  It was the one that you've been searching for, but unable to find.  Now, the world will never know what it was, and it will all be because of you Jason Sardi.  The man that put that song in my head and ruined the best blog ever!!!!!!!!!!! 
Posted by Adam Waldman - Long Island REALTOR® (Westcott Group Real Estate Company) over 2 years ago

Jason,

I like that song, hey I have two Kids..I have always written whatever comes to mind, and I gave up on thinking about a feature, becauase I am not the greatest on a computer, but Having someone like you, really helps.. Hint!! The nice e-mail :0)

Thanks,

Tom Weiss

Posted by Thomas Weiss (Thomas R. Weiss) over 2 years ago

LOL @ Adam!  :o)

Grabbing a chair, Maggie called you on that but good.  

Posted by Sarah Cooper (Real Estate Shows) over 2 years ago
Oh, I'll be back......
Posted by Jason Sardi, Mortgage Banker (FHA-VA-USDA-Conventional-Pennsylvania Loans) over 2 years ago
Jason - Now you've gone and done it! Watch out, Adam's gunning for you! Excellent post. We all contribute with each post in our own unique way.
Posted by Tom Plant (WINEormous.com) over 2 years ago
Jason:  Gosh, the more I read what you write, the more I read!!!  You tell it like it is and I am thankful for that.  Yea, sometimes.............ok a lot, I write poetry and love doing it.  I know it isn't about Real Estate, but you know what?  It is from my heart and hopefully people will get to know just who I am little by little. The wheels will keep on turning. I just want people to be Real just like Real Estate is Real.
Posted by Dianne Barody - Pensacola Florida Real Estate (Century 21 AmeriSouth Realty) over 2 years ago
Something is certainly playing over and over in my head, but thankfully... not THAT song! And be on guard my friend, a title is coming to fruition, so get ready....
Posted by Allentown PA Real Estate Broker * Jennifer Monroe * over 2 years ago
Jason - your post does have a ton of truth to it - I am sure we all have noticed that often times the same subject is written about time and time again - sometimes by the same person - sometimes not - and always with a new twist - the wheels are going round and round
Posted by Central Oregon Real Estate | Broker Thesa Chambers, Licensed in Oregon (RE/MAX Sunset Realty) over 2 years ago

Neal - In the end, the readers decide in my opinion.

Missy - Catchy, isn't it?!!

Maggie - Believe me, I pretty much agree.  Though I do urge those who are afraid to blog to do it (I'll post that at another time with links to some of my worst blogs:-) and as far as misrepresenting info...that's why there is a comment section.  Often times we learn from our own blunders and people can call us out on info that isn't accurate.  I've seen that time and again in this forum and from the mortgage side of things, products and players change sometimes daily, so what is true one day, may not be the next.  Thanks for the love raking:-)

Carole - You do just fine!  And trust me on this one, the process is ever evolving.

Diane - I have meant to try the game but haven't had the proper time to allot to it.  I will do that over the weekend.  As far as the videos, you probably won't see me doing that anytime soon, though I like the concept.

Jo-Anne - Well said, as has become the norm with you.  You do have a way with words.

Mike - LOL, somehow I knew there was a hippie deep inside of you.

Waldman - I'm always ready for a battle!  My inclusion of that song served its purpose, to stifle the creativity coming out of the Waldman brain.  I was thinking of Sun Tzu's the Art of War as I was writing this, just knowing my devious ways might somehow kill the creativity that is Adam Waldman.  HAHAHAHAHAHA!:-)

Tom - I've got your back man.

Cooper - Stirring up trouble on my blog again, I see.

Mr. Sardi - Please man, get a freaking life!

Tom - That we do Tom, that we do.  I may need a little help with that Waldman character:-)

Dianne - I checked out your poetry, very nice!  Thank you for your kind words and keep on writing, you definately have a knack for it.

Jennifer - I'm ready for the title, I know I am.  It's funny, things have been running around in my head as of late, things of a surreal nature.  I am loving it and I feel so rejuvenated that even listening to that song puts a smile on my face.

Thesa - The twists & turns are the fun part of the ride.  And those wheels are going round and round...

Posted by Jason Sardi, Mortgage Banker (FHA-VA-USDA-Conventional-Pennsylvania Loans) over 2 years ago

Jason, you are in search for the Holy Grail...it's not there.  But don't stop dreaming...you might just write it...you're that good.

BTW...that song sucks.

Posted by Bob Carney Licensed MD/PA Real Estate Agent (Long & Foster Real Estate, Inc.) over 2 years ago
That song is like Monty...it rocks!
Posted by Jason Sardi, Mortgage Banker (FHA-VA-USDA-Conventional-Pennsylvania Loans) over 2 years ago

Jason,

Nice post! The mark of a 'good blogger' is that after reading many of that person's posts, you really know more about the blogger as a person! That's how I measure effectiveness.

None of us at AR have it 'all together', but together we have it all!!! Thanks,   Fran

Posted by Fran 'The Title Man' Gaspari Title Insurance-PA & NJ (Patriot Land Transfer, Inc.) over 2 years ago
Fran - That last sentence is borderline brilliant!  I agree, thank you so much!
Posted by Jason Sardi, Mortgage Banker (FHA-VA-USDA-Conventional-Pennsylvania Loans) over 2 years ago
Jason, I agree that no one should hold themselves back from writing just because they feel they're not good enough yet.  It's like having a baby...too many people wait for the "right time" and it never is.  I'm all for putting yourself out there now and enjoying the process of learning.  It's all about the journey.  It always is.  I just thought your choice of words made it sound as if it was OK to be careless when posting facts.  I understand better now =)  I was just giving you a hard time (and enjoying it).  You're welcome for the love raking.
Posted by Palmetto Bay | Redland Real Estate | Maggie Dokic (Prudential Florida Realty) over 2 years ago

Jason,

Thank you, kind sir, for the vote of confidence.  I will am looking forward to outstanding and challenging conversations with you.   We may not always agree on things (if you recall that I enjoy the Eagles), but I do admire your creativity, writing style, and personality.  Have a most fabulous day!  :-)

Posted by Sarah Eubanks ~ Preferred Oregon Loan Consultant & Notary Public (Hill Valley Financial Services) over 2 years ago

Maggie - Now, do you really think I would advocate being careless with one's posts?  After all, have you ever known me to be careless:-)

Sarah - I call it like I see it, but you are very welcome.  You do the same!

Posted by Jason Sardi, Mortgage Banker (FHA-VA-USDA-Conventional-Pennsylvania Loans) over 2 years ago
No Jason, it took much careful thought to do that.  LMAO
Posted by Palmetto Bay | Redland Real Estate | Maggie Dokic (Prudential Florida Realty) over 2 years ago
Jason, I enjoy seeing you behind each of your posts and each of your comments. You write deep meaningful posts and remind me of someone I once knew who was on a quest... Searching.... Looking for answers....
Posted by Diane Velikis Luzerne County Real Estate (Coldwell & Banker Busch Real Estate) over 2 years ago

Darn you Maggie!:-)

Diane - I will find the answers....it's my nature.

Posted by Jason Sardi, Mortgage Banker (FHA-VA-USDA-Conventional-Pennsylvania Loans) over 2 years ago

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